re: #70 Disloyal Archangel

Does it work?

I would suggest finding different fonts. The font in white is a little too sterile. The font in reddish orange is far too florid. It gives the effect of advertising one of those cheap, hokey Halloween “Horror Houses”. Just my opinion.

I think someone else mentioned that having two different fonts in one image is generally a poor idea. It ends up making the image look “cheap” or “off”. Sort of like it has been cobbled together.