Love this part:

The new draft is a textbook example of diplomatic double-talk. Diplomats often couch objectionable outcomes in superficially unobjectionable language, using a tool that lawyers call “incorporation by reference.” Don’t repeat the offensive words in the new document; just include them by referring to another document where they can be found—and which most people won’t bother to read.

but but Hussein the Global Citizen of da World..will surely have his teleprompter ready to respond to these allegatons eh?