re: #156 SanFranciscoZionist
You missed the best, next, lines:
But in most else, she shares with sister St. Joan. Driven by visions from God and destined for sainthood by way of a burning at the stake, Sarah is misunderstood here in her own lifetime
Is English not this person’s first language, or what?
I mentioned upthread that I’d read Harry Potter fan fiction that was more realistic. I wasn’t just being snarky. In the hands of a fan fiction editor, that nonsense would have been sent back for too much purple prose, passive voice, and turning Caribou Barbie into a Mary Sue.
Heh.