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Overnight Sci-Fi Short: "MALAISE"

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chadu3/09/2014 7:15:36 am PDT

re: #123 FemNaziBitch

There is some powerful writing at this site.

That was powerful, but quite alien to read, to me.

The writer’s mindset looks coherent, but I feel like I’m looking at it through a blurred glass. Until he gets to concrete examples, I barely understand what he’s saying; then when he gets there, I don’t understand his earlier and continued vocabulary choices.

It’s a challenging read.