re: #233 Dianna

The book’s out visiting in its revised version. I’m waiting for more comments.

I’m a bit behind, but still reading it. The added material fills in some gaps, and it is easier to follow. When do you want the comments?
Meanwhile, I’ve been rewriting a big chunk of the story I sent you. There’s a whole new section in the middle, and that means the one at the end can be shorter.