re: #799 tradewind

That Last Templar two-parter started out promisingly, but ended up dull as dirt.

What do you mean “two-parter?” I read “The Last Templar,” what are you talking about?

“The Last Templar” pacing was horrible, all the “beats” were out of place, and it really sounded like he was making it up as he went along. I don’t mind “mindless” adventure like this, but gosh, I could write better than this in my sleep (modest, ain’t I).