re: #116 simon0596

I give this flounce a 6.3 out of a possible 10. Poor technical execution and haphazard structure leaves the reader with a sense of annoyance instead of solid entertainment value. Although the mandatory self pitying whine section hits some correct notes, the reader still feels the unfulfillment of the morning after a night of bad cigarettes, Boones Farm and the affections of a rotgut breathed, gap toothed barfly one picked up at 4 AM; whereas true flouncing greatness leaves one with the solid satisfaction of debauched degeneracy over a weekend at Nero’s Palace.

Strictly an amateur effort.