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turn4/20/2009 1:07:36 pm PDT

re: #248 Dianna

Yes - though I handle that a bit differently in the rewrite.

I figured something like parental abuse would be the only reason she didn’t resist captivity. I think you should also include an explanation about how she could be so friggin smart at 12 years old, that seemed a bit odd to me.