re: #243 Kosh’s Shadow

I’m a bit behind, but still reading it. The added material fills in some gaps, and it is easier to follow. When do you want the comments?
Meanwhile, I’ve been rewriting a big chunk of the story I sent you. There’s a whole new section in the middle, and that means the one at the end can be shorter.

When you’ve finished, of course. Yes, I’d like them fairly soon - I need to decide if I have more tweaking to do or if I can send it in search of an agent.

I look forward to your re-write, and I hope my comments were helpful.